by Aussie Mike on Thu Apr 26, 2007 8:43 am
Hi Tommy,
I think you've done a nice job with the cover! There's just a couple of small things I would suggest which I think might add a bit of polish to it.
Firstly, on the back cover the green colour you have used for 'A Tommy Kaye project' is a bit difficult to read over the silver band. Now if it were me, I'd make that part smaller (but that's me! I'm a designer!!) but I understand you want to establish the origin of the film.
I think you'll find that if you do make it smaller and sitting just over the area of black type from the E to the L of the word Metrosexual, it will be more legible than it being big and over a variety of different colour tones.
Also, from my experience designing DVD's (mainstream ones! not in the adult game!) you'll find you can get the type size of the copyright section a lot smaller and still fulfil your legal obligations. The reason I suggest this is to help the eye focus on the things in the design which help sell the product (the girls names, the girls themselves, your TKP logo) rather than other things.
I hope you don't mind these little suggestions. I really do think you have done a nice job. Best of luck with it,
Mike
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